Thursday, January 27, 2011

By substance

shoveling a mountain of snow
Flashing reflections quickly dash across my vision,
like sleek stylish impressions without action;
Well dressed and goodly spoken,
yet underneath somewhat broken,
by substance it compares as just a fraction

2 comments:

Mira Crisp said...

hello! I am new to your blog so I wanted to say hi. This shoveling seems like no fun! :)
Mira

javadoug said...

Thanks for your visit Mira.
Your blog has beautiful photos!